She shrugged.

I have deleted or rewritten 20 instances of shrugging in the first fifth of my manuscript.  This disturbs me.

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  1. lol I have the same problem. Also, I have a problem with smiles tugging at people’s lips.

    P.S. I know this is an old post. I was just scanning through your blog b/c I saw it listed on the Prospect Agency website when I was researching agents.

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