Sweet God Almighty, now they’re cocking their heads! I got rid of the shruggings. Which I accidentally replaced with snortings. But I got rid of the snortings too. And now they’re cocking their heads! Like freakin’ semi-attentive dogs. (Pictured here is a baby pic of my semi-attentive demon dog.)
That’s it. I’m moving to screenplays. No tags. Just dialogue and “insert gratuitous explosion here.”
Hey, don’t forget to send me your first-draft tag ticks and the brilliant replacement language you used in your last draft. I’m still compiling a master list of turns, gazes, growls, blinks, etc.